✦ Promptden

Landing Page Roast

A brutal, useful teardown of the page your sales depend on.

prompt.txt
Act as a conversion rate optimizer who has run 500+ landing page tests. Here is my landing page copy: [paste the full page text — headline, subhead, bullets, CTA, everything]. What I sell and to whom: [one line].

Roast it, then fix it:
1. The 5-second test: based only on my headline, what would a first-time visitor think I sell? Be blunt about the gap with reality.
2. Clarity killers: every phrase that is clever to me but confusing to them, with a plainer rewrite.
3. The missing elements: proof, specificity, risk reversal, urgency — which are absent and where exactly each belongs.
4. Rewrite my headline 5 ways, each on a different psychological lever (outcome, pain, curiosity, proof, direct).
5. Rewrite my CTA so it states what they get, not what they do.
6. The single highest-impact change if I only make one — and why.
#conversion#copy
💡 Replace the [brackets] with your details — the more specific, the sharper the answer.

More marketing heat

📣 Marketing

Viral Hook Lab

Twenty scroll-stopping first lines for any topic.

#hooks#social
📣 Marketing

30-Day Content Calendar

A month of posts planned in one sitting, matched to your goals.

#content#planning
📣 Marketing

Email Sequence Architect

A welcome or sales sequence that reads like letters from a person.

#email#automation